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Megan Willome's avatar

I love villanelles! This one is so good, especially with your enjambments. Yes, "Blind us with light!"

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Jody L. Collins's avatar

Anna, this is an amazing villanelle--well done!

I enjoyed these last lines,

"for heaven’s rending— O let daylight bleed

into the cracks, split this stone asunder

until our nights be day—more light, we need!

Blind us with light! Come! be our Dawn, we plead."

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