~a Lenten poem, in three parts~
I was waiting for part 3 but I can't wait. I know these thoughts. This cave. This desert. This hunger. The whining thirst. I've written of it too. But maybe not with such power.
Thank you, Lee 🧡
This is good writing. Thank you.
Thanks for reading, Daniel!
The line breaks are powerful in this one, layers of meaning like birch bark.
Thank you, Mark! I always appreciate your thoughtful comments.
I was waiting for part 3 but I can't wait. I know these thoughts. This cave. This desert. This hunger. The whining thirst. I've written of it too. But maybe not with such power.
Thank you, Lee 🧡
This is good writing. Thank you.
Thanks for reading, Daniel!
The line breaks are powerful in this one, layers of meaning like birch bark.
Thank you, Mark! I always appreciate your thoughtful comments.