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Lee Baker DeVore's avatar

I was waiting for part 3 but I can't wait. I know these thoughts. This cave. This desert. This hunger. The whining thirst. I've written of it too. But maybe not with such power.

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Anna A. Friedrich's avatar

Thank you, Lee 🧡

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Daniel Hettenbach's avatar

This is good writing. Thank you.

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Anna A. Friedrich's avatar

Thanks for reading, Daniel!

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Mark Rico's avatar

The line breaks are powerful in this one, layers of meaning like birch bark.

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Anna A. Friedrich's avatar

Thank you, Mark! I always appreciate your thoughtful comments.

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